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Brian Smith
July 5, 2011 at 2:05 am (UTC 0) Link to this comment
john,
First impressions:
1. Your game system is somewhat unique; no gm, few rules, and a collaborative feel. For a gamer that is not familiar with your system, it may be helpful to describe, in brief (less than 1 paragraph), what a typical session would look like.
2. There are some misspellings and typos (the first paragraph says ‘cheep’ instead of ‘cheap’ for example.). In addition, some of the sentences should be cleaned up to sound more formal.
3. While the game is quite short, which can be good, you could update the layout to be more readable; IE, spreading out the sections to make the file easier to reference.
still reading; I can give you more feedback after I read more.
Vaggelis Gavalakis
July 6, 2011 at 9:35 pm (UTC 0) Link to this comment
I like it overall..Brings some fresh ideas and looks very fast. When I run a session I will try and remember to come back here and post my thoughs.
I will agree with Brian as far as readability of the pdf. It needs some layout work.
Good job